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| Lots of concentration was needed! |
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| Ana's beautiful stripy egg. |
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| Mokonuiarangi worked carefully on his egg. |
During writing we wrote descriptions of the Easter Bunny. Here are some examples of our work:
Winter
The
Easter Bunny is nice. His tail is fluffy. It is so soft like a cotton ball or
marshmallows. He’ll visit my house one day; maybe give some Easter eggs for me.
The Easter Bunny is cute. The Easter Bunny has white fur and eats carrots. He
has white teeth that are sparkly and he has blue eyes. He also has a big,
humungous, enormous basket to hold all the Easter eggs.
Reweti
The
Easter Bunny is fluffy. He jumps to my house. He hides my Easter eggs. I got
one with a monster truck in it. I got a ramp. It fell apart and that was sad. I
caused a drama. I did not like it. I cried and cried but he never came back.
Cohen
The
Easter Bunny is very snuggly. It is night time when the Easter Bunny comes out
to deliver Easter eggs for New Zealand. The Easter Bunny is very tired from
delivering all those Easter eggs.
Kia ora Room 1. WOW. What an interesting blog you have Room 1. I enjoyed reading your writing about the Easter Bunny. Reweti - I liked the way you shared your feelings. I hope your teacher posts some more of your writing Room 1. Well done.
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